Novelette
Number of words : 9000
Percent of complex words : 7.0
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 12.9
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 8.0
Flesch : 75.0
Flesch-Kincaid : 6.0
SETTING
Grand Falls
Racist, redneck USA town.
CHARACTERS
Flin
Mintakan weather control expert, working on Earth leading a team.
Ruvi
Part of Flin's team, and his mate.
Judge Shaw
Grand Falls authority.
Jed
Grand Falls resident who leads the attacks on Flin and Ruvi.
Reverend Tibbs
Grand Falls preacher.
Mr Nellis
Grand Falls resident.
Sam
Grand Falls resident.
Mike
One of Jed's band of attackers.
Sherbondy
Federation diplomat.
ORGANISATIONS
Peripheral Survey
Group whose job it is to make contact with fringe worlds like Earth.
Federation
Group of allied worlds.
Galactic Center
Political seat of the Federation.
TECHNOLOGY
Miniseeders
Weather control devices.
PLOT
Flin and Ruvi are a pair, two of Flin's team of weather control experts from the Federation, sent to backwater world Earth.
While working they are travelling, and stop at Grand Falls for the night looking for accomodation. The town is completely racist, and the two aliens are green, so they are refused any hospitality. In fact, they are attacked, in more minor fashion, and run off the road when they leave town. Jed leads a group of thugs who attack them, and rape Ruvi.
That is where it stops, and the Governor and President are forced to apologise, but the town closes ranks to cover it up, led by Judge Shaw.
Before returning home, an angry Flin pays one last visit to Grand Forks, taking two miniseeders with him.
4 out of 5
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