Novelette
Number of words : 10000
Percent of complex words : 4.3
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 10.6
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 5.9
Flesch : 81.1
Flesch-Kincaid : 4.6
SETTING
California
"It was something pretty special in the line of California sunsets, and it made me feel swell, being the first one I'd seen in about nine years. The pitch was in the flatlands between Culver City and Venice, and I could smell the sea."
CHARACTERS
Jade Greene-John Damien Greene
Carnival proprietor.
Laura Darrow
New dancer tryout and assassin, Callistan cat-person.
Sindi
Martian carnival dancer from the Low Canals.
Laska
Cat-man from Callisto.
Tiny
Venusian deep-jungle man.
Punk
Kid hired by Jade. Actually an Immigration cop.
ORGANISATIONS
Jade Greene's Interplanetary Carnival
"The Wonders of the Seven Worlds Alive Before Your Eyes."
CONCEPTS
Martian getak
Carny game.
Venusian shalil
Carny game.
MEDIA
Enhali's Primitive Venus
Laura's tryout music.
RACES
Venusian lizard-men
Reptilian people with sharp teeth and claws.
Phobos moth-people
Small flyers.
Spider-people
Sticky lasso spinners.
Europans
A couple of Europans with wiry little bodies and a twenty-foot wing-spread were doing Immelmans over the geek top
FOOD
Venusian coffee
Very strong stuff, caffeine-wise.
Jitsi-beans
Mercurian vegetable.
Venusian fruit juice
Squeeze 'em.
ANIMALS
Mercurian cave tiger
A screaming feline, 20 feet long with eight legs and a barbed tail.
Ionian quags
Deep, rusty voiced cats.
Martian sand-cat
Desert feline.
Venusian cat
White tiger-like creature.
PLOT
A woman turns up at the carnival wanting to try out as a dancer. She is amazing, so is hired. Things go to hell as his cat-man goes crazy and dies, and his other dancer is killed. When the punk kid he hired is also killed, he discovers Laura has slipped up and determines she is a killer - tracking down renegade Callistans. She can influence feline animals, and sets a lot of beasts free, forcing Jade to start shooting anything catlike, including Laura.
4 out of 5
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