Short Story
Number of words : 6000
Percent of complex words : 6.6
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 11.6
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 7.3
Flesch : 76.9
Flesch-Kincaid : 5.4
SETTING
Unnamed planet under a blue star.
CHARACTERS
Barrier
Experienced older Ground Exploration team leader.
Hubbard
Ground Exploration team anthropologist.
Kendall
Ground Exploration team lead.
Aiken
Ground Exploration team archaeologist.
Caffrey
Ground Exploration team geologist.
Schmidt
Ground Exploration team entomologist.
Gordon
Ground Exploration team zoologist.
Morris
Ground Exploration team communicator.
Captain Verlaine
Master of the Survey ship.
Cristofek
Chief of Technical.
ORGANISATIONS
Galactic Survey
Sender of ships to other worlds.
RACES
Mists
Inimical alien life form on this planet.
The Shadows
Like dogs, waiting to be able to see and warn man and help again.
PLOT
Barrier is an older experienced leader of a mostly younger Ground Exploration Team for the Galactic Survey. He is growing increasingly despondent and ground down at the hostility towards man in the environments and planets he has visited.
This planet appears to be more of the same as strange mistlike beings herd and frighten and even may destroy team members. Until he realises that there is more than one group, and though scary in appearance, The Shadows actually want to help and befriend them. The past history of the planet, seen in ruins, tells why.
4 out of 5
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