Novella
Number of words : 20000
Percent of complex words : 5.5
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 12.10
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 7.0
Flesch : 78.3
Flesch-Kincaid : 5.3
SETTING
Caves
In Mercury's Twilight Belt.
Solar City
On Mercury.
CHARACTERS
Trevor
Downed on Mercury.
Jen
Escaped slave.
Galt
Korin hunt leader.
Hugh
Taken escaped slave.
Saul
Slave man.
Shannach
An alien, last of his group. A silicon based lifeform and as such very long-lived.
TECHNOLOGY
Sun-stone
Used in electronics, and for the Korins to control the hawk-lizards. Very valuable.
ANIMALS
Hawk-lizard
Jet black except for a saffron belly.
Crested beasts
"The beasts they rode were taller and slighter than horses. They were not hoofed, but clawed. They had narrow, vicious-looking heads with spiny crests that stood up erect and arrogant."
ORGANISATIONS
Korins
The Lords of Korith, descended from convicts.
PLOT
A man downed on Mercury stumbles into an air-filled pocket of habitability on Mercury, where he finds hawk-lizards flying and hunting a woman. He goes to her aid and finds she is an escaped slave, from the Korins.
The Korins in turn are controlled by an alien, Shannach - and he has used the sunstones to help the Korins control the animals and rule the slaves for him.
The slaves resist, but Trevor is captured and made to work on the shat that brought the humans here. Trevor fights, and finds a way to get outside help for himself and the rest.
3.5 out of 5
Monday, December 21, 2009
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