Novelette
Number of words : 12000
Percent of Complex Words : 3.9
Average syllables per word : 1.3
Average words per sentence : 9.6
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 5.4
Flesch : 85.8
Flesch-Kincaid : 3.7
CHARACTERS
Wes Kirk
Angry young man.
Captain's daughter
Young woman and daughter of the Ship master.
Ma Kirk
The mother.
Lil Kirk
His sister.
Pa Kirk
His father.
Captain
Master of The Ship.
First Officer
His second in command.
Second Officer
Next in the chain of command.
Third Officer
Officer Of the Day when Pa Kirk is killed.
Jakk Randl
Rebel, friend of Wes.
Wite
Second son of the First Officer.
Frank
Han man, hunter.
Russ
Han man, hunter.
Samel
Pirut leader.
Sada
Pirut woman.
TECHNOLOGY
Heat stone
Mineral used for warmth.
Attoblast
Powerful explosives.
ORGANISATIONS
Hans
People living outside the ship.
Piruts
Other group of people living outside the ship.
ANIMALS
Shags
"Five squat thick shapes with six legs; four powerful legs with claws and two
slender ones held in against the chest, armed with sucker discs for climbing. Five pairs of black eyes watching, hungry and infinitely patient. Five tucked bellies hurning under pale, shaggy hair."
MEDIA
Treaty of Alliance
"between the Sovereign Earth and the Union of Jovian Moons, providing for Earthly colonization and development of the said Moons, and mutual aid against Aggressor Worlds."
PLANTS
Sucking-plant
Used as a painful disciplinary device.
PLOT
An asteroid with a crashed Ship, and people huddled outside it as well, trying to keep warm with the few heat-stones that are left. As do the Piruts, some distance off. Both groups think the Ship dwellers are hoarding heat and technology. The latter are aggressive enough to organise a ruse and attack, using Wes' father and hunters as diversionary beat.
Wes, fired up by his dead rebel friend gets violent, and is given to the sucking plant. The captain's daughter frees him, and they end up being pursued by shags and captured by Pirut's. Wes organised with them to raid the Ship.
They discover their suspicions are false, but the Ship does contain powerful explosives. The people here are the remnants of a past conflict between a government and pirates in an interplanetary war. Unwittingly deployed, the explosives do heat up the place.
3.5 out of 5
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