Novelette
Number of words : 11800
Percent of complex words : 8.3
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 11.4
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 7.9
Flesch : 75.6
Flesch-Kincaid : 5.5
PEOPLE
Eric John Stark
N'Chaka, Man-Without-a-Tribe.
Aarl
Lord of the Third Bend. The Lord of the Abyss. Martian wizard.
Shorr Khan
King of Aldeshar in the Marches.
Song Durr
A dodgy bloke on Aldeshar.
Flane Fell
King of Tranett.
Kan Martan
One of the Lords of the Marches.
Narin Har
Chief of the joint scientific mission against the new creature.
Jhal Arn
Ruler of the Mid-Galactic Empire.
PLACES
Great Rift Valley
On Mars.
Sinharat
Ancient Martian city.
Algol
A star.
Beteleguse
A star.
Marches of Outer Space
Holds a number of the smaller star-kingdoms.
Aldeshar
A star in the Marches.
Altoh
Throne world of Aldeshar.
Donalyr
Capital of Altoh.
Strior
A planet.
Naroten
A planet.
Dendrid's Veil
A dark nebula.
Tranett
A sun.
Maktoo
A sun.
The Twins of Keldar
Suns.
Ceidri
The farthest inhabited world known.
Vega
A star-system. Has a great computer.
Rigel
A star-system. Has a great computer.
Fomalhaut
A star-system. Has a great computer.
Deneb
A star-system.
Altair
A star-system.
Antares
A star-system.
Lyra
A star-system.
Cygnus
A star-system.
Cassiopeia
A star-system.
Lepus
A star-system.
Corvus
A star-system.
Orion
A star-system.
Kesh
Martian drylands area.
Shun
Martian drylands area.
RACES
Ramas
Nearly-immortal Martians with whom Stark had once done battle in the dead city of Sinharat.
Ceidrins
People of Ceidri. Small, dark and furry.
Creature
A new being. A giant space entity of enormous power.
ORGANISATIONS
Star Kings
Men who rule a future universe.
Lords of the Marches
Rulers of the Marches region of space.
Barons of Hercules
Rulers of the Hercules cluster.
TECHNOLOGY
Helix
Amplifies Aarl's mental powers.
FTL drive
Allows travel at greater than the speed of light.
Antimatter
Possible useful for destroying young giant godlike space entities.
CONCEPTS
Dendrid
The Goddess of Death.
Galactic Arbitrary Time
Used to co-ordinate across multiple planets.
VEHICLES
Hover-cars
Flying personal transport.
Phantom scout
A fast ship.
PLOT
Aarl summons Stark, who agrees. He tells him that he is needed to help stop a great menace, and build and alliance with Shorr Khan. Something that Stark is definitely good at.
So he ends up 200,000 years in the future thanks to Aarl. He bears witness to a huge new space entity that he feels is godlike, upon contact. However, it is a stellar scale menace in this nebula void, and the Star Kings agree to try and remove it.
Stark thinks it was wrong, but Aarl reminds him survival is the higher law, and man won, here.
3.5 out of 5
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