Novelette
Number of words : 11000
Percent of complex words : 6.3
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 13.1
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 7.8
Flesch : 74.0
Flesch-Kincaid : 6.2
SETTING
Mu
Ancient civilisation, 12 thousand years in the past.
The Hole
In the ocean, how Krim and Langham are transported to Mu.
Manoa
City in ancient Mu, seat of Xacul.
CHARACTERS
Coh Langham
Adventurer and explorer, tags along with Krim.
Simon Krim
Archaeologist partner of Langham on this mad expedition. Used to work with Langham's father, also an archaeologist.
Helva
Mu woman and rebel.
Sigri
Injured young Mu man.
Itzan
Mu warrior leader for Xacul.
Xacul
Self-styled Mu god.
CONCEPTS
Kukulcan
The feathered serpent god of both the Mayans and Murians, under another name. Tattooed on Langham's chest. Sign of the Creator in ancient Mu.
Naga the Creator
Mu deity, see Kukulcan.
Quanlan
Ancient Norwegian language.
Quichua
Ecuadorian language.
PLACES
Temple of Sacred Mysteries at Uxmal
A temple of sacred mysteries, Mu style.
Hiranypura
City in Mu.
Atlantis
Another ancient civilisation with undersea issues.
Cimmeria
Another ancient civilisation.
TECHNOLOGY
Anti-gravity
Mu has flying ships.
PLOT
Brackett does Merritt. Langham and Krim are on what the latter thinks is a quest for ancient Mu, and the former thinks is crazy. Only not so much. The bottom of the Pacific does have a portal to another time.
There the pair run into an armed skirmish, brains being split. Warriors of the god Xacul (really just a really big scary guy) are capturing Naga-worshipping rebels, and also our protagonist. Helva and Sigri are captured along with Langham and Krim, and transported in flying cars. They recognise Langham as possibly special due to his Kukulcan tattoo.
To get away, they need to do something about this, with harps, duels to the death, earthquakes, pyramids, portals and time travel.
3.5 out of 5
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