Novella
Number of words : 23900
Percent of complex words : 5.3
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 15.3
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 8.3
Flesch : 76.5
Flesch-Kincaid : 6.4
PEOPLE
Eric John Stark
N'Chaka, the Man-Without-a-Tribe. Earthman, out of Mercury.
Camar
A dying Martian.
Ciaran
The warlord Ciara, Black Amazon of Mars.
Ban Cruach
A great Martian king of old.
Thord
Leader of the Riders of Mekh.
Otar
One of Ciaran's men. Elderly and crazed.
Thanis
A Kushat girl who helps Stark. Balin's sister.
Lugh
The military leader in Kushat.
Balin
A soldier of Kushat. Thanis' brother.
Rogain
A noble in Kushat.
Tika
A girl Stark knew in his youth.
PLACES
Norland
A Martian desert region.
Kushat
Where Stark is heading. A city in the Martian north.
Thieves' Quarter
Where Camar was born.
Gates of Death
A pass that opens into the black mountains beyond Kushat. Domain of Ban Cruach.
Babylon
Ancient Earth city.
Phobos and Deimos
The moons of Mars.
Jekkara and Valkis and Barrakesh
Southern cities of Mars.
CONCEPTS
Lord of Silence
A deity.
High Martian
Ancient dialect.
TECHNOLOGY
Talisman
A crystal lens, some four inches across with an intricate interlocking of many
facets. Ban Cruach's, and contains his knowledge.
Crystal Globes
Ancient technology, used for heat blocking.
Master-bank
Technology of the ice-folk.
ORGANISATIONS
Riders of Mekh
Ciaran's barbarian warriors.
RACES
Ice-folk
Shining faceless ones. The kings of the glacial ice of ages past. Banished by Ban Cruach.
WEAPONS
Ban Cruach's sword
Worries the ice-folk.
PLOT
Stark's friend Camar has taken the Talisman of Ban Cruach, and wants to take it back to Kushat. However, he has been mortally wounded, so passes it on to Stark.
Stark runs into a problem when he encounters the Riders of Merkh - a barbarian horde under the command of Lord Ciaran. He is brought in front of the lord, who shows both intelligence and brutality, but he manages to escape and make it to Kushat. Despite two of the locals, a brother and sister believing him, those in charge do not believe in barbarian hordes at the gate.
Hence, unprepared and despite Stark's effort, Kushat will soon be overrun. Stark decides to lead a charge, however, futile, and heads straight for Ciaran. They clash on horseback, both losing their weapons. This brings Stark an advantage in size as they grapple - and even more so when he realises Ciaran is actually female. She still has a good punch though, knocking Stark back.
Her own men are shocked by this revelation, but she declares he accomplishments, and when they waver she rides into them, slaughtering several. So the new boss is the as the old boss. Stark gets away in this confusion. Fascinated, however, he seeks her out in her new chambers in Kushat.
She says will eve go beyond the Gates of Death - and knows that Stark has the talisman.
Thanis' brother Balin has gone to the Gates of Death, which is very bad if in his anger at his city's loss he looses what Ban Cruach stived to hold in check. The coming of the ice-folk again.
Both Stark and Ciara are too brave to see the city go this way, even if it is not hers, and they head out to try and find Balin. There they find ancient super science and the old, cold race, and Ban Cruach's sword.
It is up to Stark to use the talisman and Ban Cruach's knowledge within to hold back this old anyway, and save Balin and Ciara.
5 out of 5
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