Novella
Number of words : 28000
Percent of complex words : 5.4
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 12.4
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 7.1
Flesch : 78.2
Flesch-Kincaid : 5.4
PEOPLE
Eric John Stark
N'Chaka, oh Man-without-a-tribe who is on the run. Gets to be an agent.
Simon Ashton
Stark's friend and mentor who has a deal for him he can't say no to.
Kynon
A barbarian chieftain from Shun. The Giver of Life.
Delgaun
A bandit, and one of the System's top criminals.
Knighton
Terran bandit. Owner of a fast cruiser.
Walsh
Terran bandit. A genius weaponeer.
Themis
Mercurian bandit. Also a mechanic.
Arrod
Callistan bandit and organised crime leader.
Luthar
Venusian bandit. A cashiered officer of the Venusian Guards. Has worked with and betrayed Stark before.
Berild
Raman woman, allied with Kynon.
Tika
Girl Stark knew, killed by a giant bird.
Freka
Kynon's captain and indulger in Shanga.
Fianna
Rama woman who is sick of the lifestyle and hates Kynon.
Kala
Old woman, owner of Kala's.
PLACES
Valkis
Martian Low Canal town.
Barrakesh
Martian Low Canal town.
Tarak
Where the Earth Commission offices are located. On the Dryland Border.
Kesh
Martian drylands area.
Shun
Martian drylands area.
Kala's
Bar in Valkis.
Belly of Stones
Ancient underground place with a secret water supply, where Stark and Berild shelter from a desert storm.
Twilight Belt
Habitable zone on Mercury.
Sinharat
Rallying point for the tribes and Kynon's plans for war. Has Catacombs.
TECHNOLOGY
Venusian spider silk
Used for making clothes.
Crowns of the Ramas
Used for mind transfer. Or so it is said.
Purcell electronic discharge
Useful for fake shows.
Shanga
The going-back drug. Makes people more primitive.
WEAPONS
Banning
An electrical gun.
ORGANISATIONS
Earth Police Control
Hunters of Stark.
Terro-Venusian Metals
A company Stark opposed.
The Martian Council of City-States
Martian government organisation.
Earth Commission
Earth government organisation related to Mars.
Venusian Guards
Venus military group.
Brotherhood of the Little Worlds
Organised crime on the smaller planetary bodies.
Space Patrol
Police organisation, whom the Brotherhood drove nuts.
RACES
Middle Venusians
Martian swamp dwellers.
Ramas
Ancient Martian serial immortals. The Twice Born.
Keshi
Martian barbarians.
CONCEPT
Banner of Death and Life
Kynon's rallying flag.
PLOT
Simon Ashton and his posse catch up to Eric John Stark, his former mentee and almost-son.
Stark has a long stretch in the slammer hanging over his head, so Ashton offers him a deal. Be his agent in trying to break up the plans Kynon and Delgaun have for provoking an inter-regional war, and the slate is wiped clean.
Stark does so and discovers at the heart of it, along with several crimelords are a pair of women. Both take an interest in him, and Fianna wants to aid him.
Stark has an enemy in Luhar, who sold him out when he was doing some gunrunning for some locals. Therefore, they try and set him up at Kala's when he is tasked with retrieving one of Kynon's captains, Freka, from his overindulgence in Shanga. Or, Wild Man vs Beastial Men.
The woman Berild also takes an interest in Stark, growing tired of Kynon, and has her own plans. She is trapped in a desert storm with Stark, who helps her to survive, along with her knowledge of a secret underground water supply.
At Sinharat, Stark discovers that the ancient Rama race remnants are at the heart of this conspiracy, including Berild, Delgaun and Fianna. When Kynon realises he has been manipulated, he turns on his allies, with Stark. Fianna takes the Raman personality switching Crowns to hide, telling Stark that if he is tired of growing old, to come and find her, as she can't bring herself to destroy them, in case she wants to use them again.
4 out of 5
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