The Long Tomorrow - Leigh Brackett

Novel

Number of words : 80000
Percent of complex words : 5.8
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 18.0


READABILITY INDICES

Fog : 9.5
Flesch : 74.7
Flesch-Kincaid : 7.3



: The Long Tomorrow - Leigh Brackett


SETTING

A post nuclear holocaust USA where the oldest people still alive were very young children at the time. It is now politically dominated by Mennonite types who are against technology and expansion, and some of them are of the more violent persuasion. That is, they will stone offenders to death.

Piper's Run

Colter's home town, in Pennsylvania.

Refuge

A larger town, approaching the legal limit for development according to the Thirtieth Amendment. Situated on the North bank of the Ohio. Most of the people of a different sect here.

Shadwell

A commercial rival town on the Kentucky side of the Ohio.

Bartorstown

A hidden mountain settlement with a functioning computer, doing research into anti-nuclear defenses: "named for Henry Waltham Barter, the Secretary of Defense who had it built". It is near the Fall Creek mining town.


CHARACTERS

Len Colter

Boy that favors learning and advancement. Acquires some physics books and a radio against the wishes of the elders.

Esau Colter

Len's cousin, their destinies entertwined.

Amity Taylor

Girl from refuge, love interest of both and later wife of Esau.

Elijah Colter

Len's father.

Judge Taylor

Refuge authority figure and conservative.

Reba Taylor

His wife and Amity's mother.

Mike Dulinsky

Refuge businessman who wants to expand past the legal limits, forces a conflict.

Ed Hostetter

Bartorstown trader and agent keeping an eye on Len.

Gran

Len's grandmother.

David Colter

Esau's father, a conservative.

James Colter

Len's brother.

Ma

Len's mother.

Soames

Man who is stoned to death for being a progressive.

Mr. Nordholter

The schoolmaster and Piper's Run councilman.

Mr. Spofford

Miller and James future father-in-law.

Mr. Glasser

Piper's Run councilman.

Mr. Harkness

Piper's Run councilman.

Mr. Clute

Piper's Run councilman.

Mr. Fenway

Piper's Run councilman.

Fisher

New Mennonite in Refuge.

Meyerhoff

Refuge conservative.

Noah Burdette

Twin Lakes preacher who comes with farmers to confront Dulinksy and shotguns him down.

Ames

Refuge conservative that tries to lynch Len.

Watts

Refuge conservative that tries to lynch Len.

Harry Sherman

Bartorstown mine superintendent.

Joe Kovacs

Bartorstown river-boat man.

Collins

Bartorstown radio operator.

Petto

Bartorstown electronics man.

Rosen

Bartorstown administrator and canal operator.

Charlie

Bartorstown boiler operator.

Wepplo

Bartorstown man, father of Joan and hence father-in-law of Len.

Julio Gutierrez

Bartorstown chief physicist.

Frank Erdmann

Bartorstown electronics engineering chief.

Mary Sherman

Sherman's wife and manager.

Joan Wepplo

Wepplo's disaffected daughter, becomes Len's wife.

Jones

Bartorstown man.

Jim Sidney

Bartorstown steam plant chief.

Irv Rothstein

Bartorstown librarian.


ORGANISATIONS

New Mennonites

Mutated and more aggressive form of the pre-holocaust strain.

Old Mennonites

Pre holocaust religious sect.

Amish

Pre holocaust religious sect.

Church of Holy Thankfulness

Called Kellerites after the James P. Keller who founded the sect. Many such in Refuge.

Ishmaelites

Group of wandering extreme religious crazies that can be aggressively violent.



TECHNOLOGY

Clementine

The name for Bartorstown's computer.


CONCEPTS

Solution Zero

Term for the possibility that Bartorstown will never be able to discover a working forcefield as an anti-nuclear defence.



PLOT

Len and Esau Colter are older boys in a New Mennonite society that is around 3 generations removed from a nuclear war that destroyed the cities. This particular religious group grew out of the old being suited to life in this setting. They have seized political power in some places. They believe in keeping a static way of life, and have amended the Constitution to limit the size of human settlements by law. This also inclues technological proscription as work of the devil. Complete with stonings to death, etc.

Len and Esau want more, and after having their childhoods literally beaten out of them due to an incident with some purloined textbooks and a radio decide they will leave. They do, and go to Refuge. This town is run by a different sect, and is more commerce oriented, as opposed to agriculture. One local businessman is looking to expand past the limits of the law, and Len takes his side. This leads to a literally fiery and violent confrontation where Dulinsky is shot.

A Bartorstown traded named Hostetter had been keeping an eye on Len, and manages to get the boys and Amity out of trouble, and takes them on the trek to Bartorstown. They find out they have nuclear power and a computer, and are rather stunned. Their upbringings clash very hard with what they see, mentally. Esau is both less bright and now also a father, so manages to settle. Len falls in with Joan, who has teenaged boredom with being stuck in the one place, and sees Len as a way out, little understanding how things are out in the world, even though Len does. An attractive young woman, she marries him and they do make a run for it - but what to do when you have no place in particular to go and it is hard to go anywhere or be accepted anywhere is a big problem.

Hostetter tracks them down, and it is life or death decision time, absolutely, for Len. Bartorstown can't have people leading a raid to their facility, so it is up to Len as to what he will do. Joan has had enough, too.


4 out of 5

The Citadel Of Lost Ages - Leigh Brackett

Novella

Number of words : 20000
Percent of complex words : 6.0
Average syllables per word : 1.4
Average words per sentence : 11.3




READABILITY INDICES

Fog : 6.9
Flesch : 80.2
Flesch-Kincaid : 4.9


SETTING

The Citadel

Future Earth, postapocalytpic, with aliens. Place of power in New York, near the Palisades. ""Sunk a half mile deep in solid rock—area larger than the Empire State Building—lined and reinforced with steel—earthquake-proof, floodproof—heat and air supplied by sea!ed atomic generators with an efficiency period of five thousand years .. .""

Temple of Eternal Night

Numi religious structure.

The Desert Gate

Through which you must go to reach The Citadel.


CHARACTERS

Fenway-Fenn

Sleeper and prisoner that awakens with a dodgy memory and important technological knowledge.

Arika

Girl that Fenway knows. Half-blood Numi.

Malech

Arika's brother, but takes after his Numi side.

RhamSin

Jailor of Fenn and Numi religious leader.

Lannar

Outlaw leader.




RACES

Numi

Race of aliens, their names means New Men.


CONCEPTS

The Great Dark

Term for static diurnal planet.


The Destruction

Term for the damage caused by the Dark Star passing earth.


PLOT

Fenway awakes in the future dominated by the New Men. (They may be aliens, may be a mutation caused by an Earth changed by astronomoical calamity) and meets Arika, a half-breed, again. Also her brother. Fenn knows if he can remember how to get to The Citadel. A place in New York where humans stored examplars of technology and techniques for future survival, post Destruction.

The Numi leader RhamSin is also interested in this, but Fenn finds aid in an outlaw band-but the divided loyalties of the half-breed siblings cause problems. Once at The Citadel Fenn has the advantage because of his knowledge of the tech, if he can remember the deadly uses.


4 out of 5